Let's connect :) LinkedIn -> Mohamed Chahin Instagram -> @mo_chahin
Let's connect :) LinkedIn -> Mohamed Chahin Instagram -> @mo_chahin Examples for bad subject lines: Really bad examples are “hello from bla bla” or “meeting bla bla” or “Introducing XYZ”. Why should I open that email? Nothing gives me a reason that I, as the recipient, will benefit from opening this message. When you write “important message from xyz” all my sirens blare “don’t open it, you will waste your time”. Examples for good subject lines: “Tom told me you’re thinking about integrating a new CRM” “Your running buddy Jane said we should have lunch” “I noticed you’re interested in aerospace, just dropping you the latest news”
Let's connect :) LinkedIn -> Mohamed Chahin Instagram -> @mo_chahin Examples made in the episode: Example 1: Hi Mo, i was wondering if i can talk to you tomorrow at 10 am so i can show you what we've been working on”. compare that to this sentence rephrased: “Hi Mo, you asked to be informed as soon as you can have a look at the work you were so keen to learn more about the last time you visited. The earliest you can come by is tomorrow at 10 am. Do you prefer another day or is tomorrow convenient for you?” It even works with trivial sentences: Hi Mo, i'm writing to you because of XYZ” compared to “ Hi Mo, you’re reading this because of XYZ”