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58. Show, don't Tell Page Review: Memoir with Marcel Charpentier

58. Show, don't Tell Page Review: Memoir with Marcel Charpentier

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In this page review episode, Suzy critiques a page from a Memoir with a twist- Marcel Charpentier is writing the story of his personal friend's childhood in collaboration with her. They discuss incorporating showing details and sense memory through the eyes of a child, and how to approach narrative distance. 

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58. Show, don't Tell Page Review: Memoir with Marcel Charpentier

58. Show, don't Tell Page Review: Memoir with Marcel Charpentier