Painstaking by Rich Larson (audio)
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This podcast features Rich Larson's story "Painstaking," narrated by Kate Baker. It follows Mars, who shares his body with a symbiotic organism that grants rapid healing. Mars arrives in Winduka, a city driven by solar storage and rare earth extraction, seeking to avoid detection. He grapples with the existence of his twin brother, Balorabe, who was born from his own flesh and exhibits a fascination with anatomy. Mars survives a brutal attack by a "Butcher Drone," showcasing the organism's resilience. He then searches for Balorabe, fearing for his safety, and they reunite amidst a storm. After encountering a vendor who saw Balorabe heading west, Mars pursues him, leading to a tense encounter with police at a theater. Balorabe dramatically intervenes, and despite further injury to Mars, they acknowledge their separate paths. The brothers journey south, discussing their past and evolving identities, ultimately accepting their individual existences and the wonder of their unique biological makeup. The story also touches upon themes of advanced technology like "Face Hunting Algorithms" and "Nanonife," and societal elements such as the "Sub-Saharan Alliance" and the need for "Biometric Cards."
Outlines

Introduction and Author Spotlight
Introduction to Clarkesworld magazine podcast, host Kate Baker, and author Rich Larson. Highlights Larson's background, previous works, and accolades, including an Emmy-winning adaptation.

Mars's Arrival and the Nature of His Existence
Mars arrives in Winduka, a city experiencing growth due to solar storage and rare earth extraction. He navigates the city, seeking food and avoiding detection, highlighting the challenges of anonymity. He reflects on his name and his twin brother, Balorabe, who was born from his own mangled flesh. Balorabe's self-vivisection reveals his fascination with anatomy and the organism's limits, creating tension between the brothers.

Survival, Escape, and Reunion
Mars's capsule is attacked by a "Butcher Drone." Despite severe injuries, his organism rapidly heals him, showcasing its resilience. He fights back, disabling the drone. Mars, injured but healing, escapes the drone attack. He searches for Balorabe, fearing for his safety, and they eventually reunite amidst a storm, their relationship evolving.

Pursuit and Confrontation
Mars encounters a vendor who reveals he saw Balorabe heading west. Mars borrows an electric bicycle to pursue his brother, heading towards Meura Mall. Mars searches for Balorabe at a darkened theater but finds only police. He attempts to de-escalate the situation, explaining his origins and seeking information about his twin. Balorabe dramatically intervenes, incapacitating the police. In the ensuing chaos, Mars is injured again, but the organism heals him. They acknowledge their diverging paths and shared past.

Journey South and Reconciliation
Mars and Balorabe travel south along the river and then the highway. They discuss their past, their differing experiences, and their evolving identities as individuals, not a single entity. The brothers continue their journey, finding sustenance at a charging station. They reflect on the wonder of the cultured cells and their individual existence, accepting their separate paths.
Keywords
Obligate Carnivore
An organism that requires a regular diet of meat to survive. In the story, Mars shares his body with one, influencing his senses and potentially his actions.
Face Hunting Algorithms
Technology used for facial recognition, likely employed by military or security forces to track individuals. Mars avoids taxis due to their internal cameras and these algorithms.
Sub-Saharan Alliance
A political or military entity mentioned in the context of border control and government policies. South Africa's government does not tolerate interference from them.
Biometric Cards
Identification cards that use unique biological traits for verification. Mars and his twin need these to disappear into South African cities, but they take time to forge.
Quick Crete Hives
Habitations likely made of a fast-setting material, designed to house temporary workers like miners and solar riggers. Mars and his twin use one for temporary, private lodging.
Nanonife
A highly advanced, small knife, likely utilizing nanotechnology for its construction or function. Mars uses one as a weapon, and Balorabe also possesses one.
Butcher Drone
A heavily armed, military-grade drone designed for combat and hunting. Mars is attacked by one, equipped with a shotgun and a saw, highlighting advanced weaponry.
Organism (Symbiont)
A unique, possibly alien or genetically engineered, entity that lives within Mars and Balorabe, granting them rapid healing and invulnerability but requiring sustenance.
Vat Beef
Cultured meat produced in a laboratory or tank, often used as a comparison for artificial or non-organic life. It's contrasted with natural meat and the brothers' own existence.
Q&A
What is the significance of Mars's ability to not feel pain?
Mars was selected for a gene lab due to his congenital inability to feel pain. This trait, along with his unique organism, makes him and his twin valuable and a target for pursuers.
How did Mars and Balorabe come to be?
Balorabe is a clone brother grown from Mars's mangled flesh after Mars survived a near-fatal accident. They are genetically identical but did not share a womb, representing the organism's ability to regenerate and create.
What is the primary conflict Mars faces in the story?
Mars is on the run from unknown pursuers who value him and his twin. He must evade capture while navigating a dangerous world, protecting his brother, and dealing with their shared, yet increasingly separate, existence.
How does the "organism" affect Mars and Balorabe?
The organism grants them rapid healing, invulnerability, and enhanced physical capabilities. However, it is also ravenous, requiring constant sustenance, and its limits are explored through Balorabe's self-experimentation.
What does the encounter with the Butcher Drone reveal about Mars's capabilities?
Despite severe injuries, Mars's organism allows him to survive and fight back. His tactical thinking and use of the nanonife demonstrate his combat skills and determination to survive against advanced threats.
How does the relationship between Mars and Balorabe evolve?
Initially, they are meant to be one person, with Mars guiding Balorabe. As Balorabe develops his own memories and identity, their relationship shifts to one of separate individuals, marked by conflict, understanding, and eventual reconciliation.
What is the significance of the storm in the story?
The storm serves as a dramatic backdrop, mirroring the internal turmoil and external dangers faced by the brothers. It also aids their escape and influences their journey, making their path more challenging but also potentially masking their movements.
Show Notes
The text version of this story can be found at:
https://clarkesworldmagazine.com/larson_02_26
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