TOEFL iBT | Independent Essay | Evaluating an Essay #6 | How to Get a 24
Here it is, people! The last Independent Essay from my previous student who ended up achieving a 24 on her writing, giving her a grand total of 100 for her test.
So, in this video/podcast, this is what a 23/24 essay would look like, but the amount of things she could have done better is staggering. Nonetheless, hear me break down each paragraph, try drawing conclusions of the 2nd body paragraph, and see if everything correlates -- which it doesn't. This is a great learning lesson for most of you out there, and she made a quantum leap to get that 24, which I'm absolutely so happy about.
Here's the essay topic.
People learn things better from those at their own levels—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
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