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311. How to Fix an Unconvincing Sentence (Persuasion Series - Part 2)

311. How to Fix an Unconvincing Sentence (Persuasion Series - Part 2)

Update: 2022-09-06
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From time to time, you will find yourself faced with an unconvincing sentence. The rest of the text may be persuasive, but one sentence in particular sounds off. To fix an unconvincing sentence, you have to ask yourself the following question: is the problem inside or outside the sentence? In other words, is the problem the words or the content? If the problem is inside the sentence, you must revise the words and choose them more carefully. If the problem is outside the sentence, then you must revise the paragraph's content.

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311. How to Fix an Unconvincing Sentence (Persuasion Series - Part 2)

311. How to Fix an Unconvincing Sentence (Persuasion Series - Part 2)

Leandre Larouche