DiscoverAuthors' Alcove for Fantasy WritersAre Your Story Stakes Strong Enough? Tips from a Developmental Editor
Are Your Story Stakes Strong Enough? Tips from a Developmental Editor

Are Your Story Stakes Strong Enough? Tips from a Developmental Editor

Update: 2025-05-25
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Ever wonder what are stakes in fiction and how to build tension in a scene? Rebecca discusses things like character-driven conflict, high-stakes storytelling and much more as us writers learn how to edit our book ourselves. In this high-impact episode of 52-Week Story Savvy, editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and guest host standing in for Christine Nicholas aspiring author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] break down the crucial role of stakes in storytelling—and how to raise them without losing reader trust.

Together, they define what stakes really are (hint: it's not always life or death!) and how to weave them seamlessly into your plot using tools like Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs and stakes spectrums. You’ll discover how to analyze global and chapter-level stakes, keep scenes engaging, and avoid common missteps like artificial plot twists and inconsistent tension.

Whether you're writing a slow-burn fantasy, a fast-paced thriller, or character-driven fiction, this episode will help you pinpoint what your characters stand to lose—and why it matters.

In This Episode:

  • The difference between goals, motivations, and stakes

  • Using Maslow’s Hierarchy to layer character needs

  • Chapter-by-chapter vs. global stakes

  • Varying stakes to avoid a flat narrative

  • Literal, figurative, and internal life-or-death spectrums

  • How to escalate stakes without breaking believability

  • Why readers must understand the stakes by the midpoint

  • A self-editing checklist for testing stakes scene by scene

Recommended Resources:

[00:00 ] Intro

[01:07 ] Defining Stakes in Storytelling

[03:07 ] Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs and Stakes

[04:10 ] Chapter vs. Global Stakes

[06:05 ] Variety in Stakes

[07:59 ] Identifying and Strengthening Stakes

[09:01 ] Types of Stakes Beyond Life and Death

[14:14 ] Exploring Internal and External Stakes

[16:21 ] Assessing the Power of Stakes

[19:00 ] Establishing Stakes Without Death

[21:05 ] Grounding Stakes in the Narrative

[23:01 ] Raising Stakes Gradually

[26:37 ] Determining Global Success or Failure

[28:01 ] Timing the Revelation of Stakes


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Are Your Story Stakes Strong Enough? Tips from a Developmental Editor

Are Your Story Stakes Strong Enough? Tips from a Developmental Editor

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