Daredevil Critique – ‘Agent Jackson’s Action Faction’ by MJ McElhaney

Update: 2025-09-12

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Listen in as the judges of the Not Quite Write Prize for Flash Fiction deliver an unfiltered critique of Agent Jackson’s Action Faction by MJ McElhaney.

This story appeared in the July 2025 Not Quite Write Prize for Flash Fiction, which featured the anti-prompt: Break the rule “use active voice”.

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