Episode 28 - The 5 Ways to Ruin the Opening of Your Book And Make Your Reader Hate You
Update: 2025-07-18
Description
Want to guarantee your reader never turns page two?
In this episode, I’m breaking down five deadly sins of story openings — from worldbuilding overload to hiding your protagonist behind four pages of weather descriptions.
We’ll cover why info-dumps kill momentum, how delaying the inciting incident loses trust, and what happens when you open with a side character no one asked for.
If you want to hook your reader instead of confuse them, this is how to make your first chapter actually work.
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