This is VIJEV and let’s talk about storytelling. I’ve been learning how to use AI for storytelling, including trying out ChatGPT and even Notion AI to assist with creative writing. I’ve created a story with my own plot, characters and twists. I then asked AI to help rewrite some of the sentences to be more coherent and of course with better grammar. I then took the story and fed it with ChatGPT again to create a narrative that had a bit more sarcastic humour to suit the style of a noir detective story set in a sci-fi world. Imagine that I baked the cake and the AI helped with the icing. Here it begins.

Synthetic Murder

It was a dark and stormy night. Yours truly, Detective Vaj Appan, playing gumshoe in the city that never sleeps, because really, who could sleep with all these factories running? The city is Amartek, 2049 AD. A Tuesday, 6pm. At least the nightlife was consistent, if you're into the whole burnt oil from the East and charred masala from the West kind of vibe. And let me tell you, folks, this metaphor for my life couldn't have been more original. My duality: half-man, half-cybernetic, all-confusion.

Now gather 'round, kiddos, because I'm going to share the thrilling tale of that one fateful call that changed my life forever. I mean, really, how could it not? It was the warehouse factory, where they discovered a human supervisor, deader than disco, murdered by an automaton. Unthinkable! It was like one of those cheesy B-movies that nobody watches.

But here's the kicker: with a gaggle of detectives available in the area, who do they assign the case to? Yours truly, Detective Vaj "I-Swear-I-Know-What-I'm-Doing" Appan. Because this was one of those sensitive cases, and they needed someone who could straddle both worlds. So who better than the guy who has electronic spare parts to make me whole?

Ah, yes, the automatons. Or robots, or AI, or "mechanical overlords," or “job stealers” or whatever the kids are calling them these days. They were our trusty, efficient workers who put us, humans, out of business. No incidents for years, and then suddenly, a bump in the night. I was stumped, flummoxed even. Was it an accidental glitch, or was someone pulling the robotic strings? This city hadn't been shaken like this since Windows 3.1 came out, and that's ancient history, my friends.

So there I was, stepping into the dilapidated warehouse factory like I owned the place. The first thing to assault my senses was the charming aroma of rusted metal and oil, a real olfactory treat. The once silent machines were now whirring so loudly that I could hardly hear myself think. So, with grim determination, I made my way to the late human supervisor's office, the door stubbornly locked from the inside. But never fear, for Detective Vaj "Who-Needs-A-Warrant" Appan used a key, a true testament to my detective prowess.

As I entered, I was struck by the tidiness of the office, a stark contrast to the chaotic factory floor. Everything had its place, except for the corpse sprawled on the floor. That's our dearly departed supervisor, alright. Upon close examination, it was obvious he'd been strangled to death. It all seemed too personal, like a high-stakes game of robotic Twister gone wrong. The automaton's muscular arm was covered in human blood, with clear signs of a struggle. Reliable machines, huh? Colour me unsettled.

Well, well, wasn't this a riveting mystery straight out of a pulp fiction novel? So there I was, knee-deep in this case, sauntering out of that factory with all the ambience of a robotic assembly line, and boy was the city skyline a painter's cliché: orange and red as a digital firestorm. Time to hit up the supervisor's stomping ground – The Binary & Biryani, where your meal came in two modes: hot or not.

As I strutted into the joint, the spice factor sucker-punched my nostrils like a prizefighter, taking me down memory lane where lactose-free yoghurt offered me cool reprieve. Mrs Kamala, the owner, waved me over like a fond aunt with an open booth and an open heart.

"Detective, the supervisor is dead, it’s just too tragic for words. A good man has gone too soon," she lamented. I nodded in solemn agreement.

"A heartbreaker indeed. Now, any odd happenings the night our dear friend made his last curtain call?" I asked.

Promptly, I requested a peek at their surveillance records – you know, those things that track your every move like a hawk on a hot tin roof. I sipped my masala latte, as steamy as the footage Mrs Kamala pulled up for my eager eyes.

The late, great supervisor waltzed into the scene, placing an order for his go-to grub – biryani with a side of lassi. He checked his watch like the White Rabbit with an appointment, and after shelling out some dough, he headed for the exit. But alas! A stranger materialized, bumping into him with all the grace of a tipsy android. Profuse apologies followed, along with a lassi clean-up operation. They swapped a few words, and our dear supervisor beat it, the mysterious man hot on his heels. Mrs Kamala, bless her soul, said the stranger was a regular. I offered my gratitude and pocketed every morsel of intel I could.

As I weaved through Amartek's bustling streets, my guts churned like a load of laundry on spin-cycle. This tale was shaping up to be darker than a moonless night on Mars. I had to hustle before things went further south than the asteroid belt.

On the blackest of nights, when the shadows swirled and the streetlights failed, I stumbled upon the man who had shadowed the supervisor, like a pixel chasing a byte. He was lurking in the alley, the perfect setting for every crime noir story, chomping on something that looked like synthetic betel leaves while exhaling puffs of smoke that would make a fog machine proud.

Cautiously, I walked towards him, slapping on my lead detective smile. He sized me up like I was a commodity on the intergalactic black market before flicking his cigarette to the ground.

"What do you want?" he barked, voice gruffer than a malfunctioning audio speaker.

"Oh, you know, just asking about your latest stalking escapade outside The Binary & Biryani," I said.

He didn't even bat an eyelid and said, "I just wanted to chat with him. That's all."

"Well, it must have been a conversation to die for... 'cause he croaked later that day," I quipped. "You wouldn't know anything about that, would you?" The man's face could've been carved from an asteroid rock.

"I don't know what you're talking about." replied the man.

With eyes narrowed, I scrutinized him like a detective in a holo-movie. "You'd better start singing, or it's off to the station for a little chit-chat."

He let out a sigh that could've powered a small wind turbine. "Alright. I followed him, but only to whisper sweet nothings of caution in his ear. He was meddling in matters that were strictly off-limits."

"I can't say more, it's dangerous like a black hole. But listen," he paused, surveying the scene for eavesdropping automatons. "There are those who aren't thrilled with the metallic takeover of human jobs. They're itching to blow the whole system to smithereens, and they'll destroy anything in their path. So just watch yourself."

My mental gears whirred faster than an overclocked CPU. Sure, automatons doing human work had been a sore spot since we played God and created AI, but who wouldn't prefer a cold, calculating machine to, say, a disgruntled artist? Efficiency had soared and the world had become a safer place, but these anti-automaton factions just couldn't resist the allure of good, old-fashioned work that humans are meant to do. To them, work is the reason for living.

With a nod, I bade my informant adieu and exited the alley, thoughts swirling like neon advertisements in the smog-filled air. These factions had been quiet, snuffed out by government crackdowns. But had they risen like the phoenix from the ashes? And why now? My hunt for evidence had turned up zilch in the warehouse, except for one suspicious killer automaton. No witnesses to spill the beans.

A gripping tale, indeed.

Back at the office, my fingers danced over the keyboard like a 22nd-century jazz pianist who never skipped class, as I sifted through the work and maintenance schedules. You see, these automatons get their nightly tune-ups with firmware updates, like an insomniac's bedtime story. The rogue automaton had a hiccup in its routine, a little dance number right after a remote update, precisely an hour post-supervisor-slaughter. Convenient.

These updates were shipped from the mother of all AI suppliers, IAW - Integrated Automation Works. Digging into their cyberspace innards was like hacking into your sibling’s computer searching for hidden exotic games they stored in sub-folders titled “work”, but after an arduous dance with firewalls and encryption, I traced the IP address to an abandoned warehouse that had seen better days. Cops swarmed the place like an alien invasion, discovering a faction camp so blatant they might as well advertise it with a neon sign.

It was like unearthing a relic from a bygone era; a faction thought extinct had sprung back to life just to ice the supervisor? My overworked synapses tried to connect the dots. How could these amateurs infiltrate the digital fortress of IAW without an inside man? Of course… there had to be an inside man.

The plot thickened like molasses on a cold winter's day. Maybe the factions were a convenient scapegoat, a smokescreen for a deeper, darker agenda. I had to chase the truth, and my instincts whispered that the man in the alley was clutching more cards than he showed. Time for a reunion.

Steel nerves and a mental encyclopedia of potential plot twists armed me for the inevitable confrontation. I had to pick this guy's brain and pry open the secr